Vanessa...good job like always. Good job creating diff scenarios. The environment was very clear. Really enjoyed how you brought so many colors to the 2nd take...with the warmth and comedy. you executed that quite nicely. I also felt like you incorporated what the person you were imagining was saying into your next line...very nice! My only note is: I notice you sometimes stop your action to speak. Try to keep your action going as you do the copy. Its something I see actors do and i think keeping the action going really adds a seamlessness to the takes. It doesnt mean to never stop...but keep actions going more often than not.
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Vanessa...good job like always. Good job creating diff scenarios. The environment was very clear. Really enjoyed how you brought so many colors to the 2nd take...with the warmth and comedy. you executed that quite nicely. I also felt like you incorporated what the person you were imagining was saying into your next line...very nice! My only note is: I notice you sometimes stop your action to speak. Try to keep your action going as you do the copy. Its something I see actors do and i think keeping the action going really adds a seamlessness to the takes. It doesnt mean to never stop...but keep actions going more often than not.