Malinda Logan_Blueprint Speaking Audition
Hey Power Group! This was a tough one for me. I actually enjoyed my OYO for this one way more than this Blueprint (both in the process of making it and the final results). Ha! I don't know if I got in my head more due to the extra analysis, memorization, trying to sound more natural etc. I also wasn't sure if these choices should have included a credit card (trying not to "sell" since that was advice given in the module) and so I changed up my circumstances from my OYO choices - but I think that really made me doubt what I was doing. Anyway, I'm not meaning to give anyone extra work - but if with your review, you can keep these things in mind, and give me your honest thoughts/suggestions. I am SO open for this one. Thank you so much!!
Thank you so much!
Hi Malinda!
I think you did an amazing job going from your OYO to your Blueprint! My personal favorite take from you is Take1 in your Blueprint. I felt like it was clear what the scenario was and who you were talking to, and it felt like that was the take you were most connected with. I thought Takes 2 and 3 were great performance wise, but I was a little unsure as to who specifically you may have been talking to. I want to say Take 2 involved a cashier at a store, but take 3 was a little more vague to me. I, too, struggle with creating characters that create different tones, so I agree with you with the "overthinking" part haha! You are not alone LOL. But Jenny's comments about enhancing the characters by creating more specific characters in much more specific scenarios may help. This was still great work though, as I felt like your energy was there , your framing was great, and you have a sense of ease when performing ! Awesome stuff !