Good job with two takes Zoey!!! only notes would be be a bit more in bound with the scratch and make your framing a bit tighter. BUT with that said your 2nd take was perfection....especially with the pay off. The choices you made really show the viewer that you get what they are selling...you get to go on the trip after all....why bc you are saving and have no problems bc of the insurance you chose. Excellent choice.
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Good job with two takes Zoey!!! only notes would be be a bit more in bound with the scratch and make your framing a bit tighter. BUT with that said your 2nd take was perfection....especially with the pay off. The choices you made really show the viewer that you get what they are selling...you get to go on the trip after all....why bc you are saving and have no problems bc of the insurance you chose. Excellent choice.