first take: very nice! I get who you are selling to and the arc of the character going from stressed to relieved and it is solidified with your moment after very nice.If i am going to get super specific....I would be carrying a purse bc mom always have to have a bunch of stuff for their kids....that would solidify the mom vibe. take two: good job with the change of physicality...it even changed your character to have status. for the line , I just have to talk to a teller....I would have started walking away...bc that is what you would do no? and great job with your moment after. 3rd take felt most like you....I liked the pace...I think that pace was spot on compared to the other two and dont feel like you have to say "thank you higher power" just by you looking up and saying thank you...it does the job.
About
1) After watching the Scene Auditions Blueprint: Upload your...
first take: very nice! I get who you are selling to and the arc of the character going from stressed to relieved and it is solidified with your moment after very nice.If i am going to get super specific....I would be carrying a purse bc mom always have to have a bunch of stuff for their kids....that would solidify the mom vibe. take two: good job with the change of physicality...it even changed your character to have status. for the line , I just have to talk to a teller....I would have started walking away...bc that is what you would do no? and great job with your moment after. 3rd take felt most like you....I liked the pace...I think that pace was spot on compared to the other two and dont feel like you have to say "thank you higher power" just by you looking up and saying thank you...it does the job.