really liked the arc of the 1st take....I could see how you went from stressed to chase solving your problems. I also liked your thought for the day for what...like you forgot something. very nice and specific. The pace was also very nice. 2nd take: liked the anxiety around it. and LOOOOVED Your moment after...that kidn of moment after can book you the job! You can tell the 3rd one she is super nice. and I liked how you had a moment after that was connected to your moment before. The one thing to consider adding Jas is more physicality. maybe looking in your bag for your card...or multi tasking by taking on the phone...bc this ad is likely for busy busy people....that are multi tasking.
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really liked the arc of the 1st take....I could see how you went from stressed to chase solving your problems. I also liked your thought for the day for what...like you forgot something. very nice and specific. The pace was also very nice. 2nd take: liked the anxiety around it. and LOOOOVED Your moment after...that kidn of moment after can book you the job! You can tell the 3rd one she is super nice. and I liked how you had a moment after that was connected to your moment before. The one thing to consider adding Jas is more physicality. maybe looking in your bag for your card...or multi tasking by taking on the phone...bc this ad is likely for busy busy people....that are multi tasking.