Blueprint Speaking Auditions

hi victoria. my favorite was the 2nd take....just was natural and conversational. I liked the first one two but it went a little film/tv tone instead of commercial. loved the honesty of the performance but keep it a little lighter....you are crying of happiness about being approved. but this is your best friend and you are so happy to share this info so they can get a house too.

1st take: perfection. no notes. Take 2 (really liked the vunerability) and 3 are similar. Your performances are soooo natural and beautful that you can get away with it...but I want to challenge you! ;) yes I agree one of your takes could be spokesperson. and for take 3 what would have happened if you were talking to your buddies over a beer? how would that have changed the copy/performance? or what if you are a bartener and you are wiping down the counters as you are closing the bar? Ideas to make each take more distinct.