Blueprint Speaking Auditions

Good work angie: It was clear you who you were speaking to in each and that you were in diff circumstance. I just have minor notes on each: Take one: love the idea of being in a baseball game (I have never seen anyone do that before..good job) liked your moment before. But I would have done the copy as you trying to calm yourself down as opposed to you talking to someone....only bc I think that is what would have been happening in the sitation you painted. Meaning if bases are loaded youare not going to stop to tell someone that. You are paying attention and trying to send good energy and remain calm . take 2. I really liked that you were cheering up a group that just lost. excellent...bc its so clear. I would have a shift of energy by the end of the copy...they might not be as sad....bc of your speech. this will help add some colors to the material and a bit of an arc. take 3: lovely.