1st take: perfection. no notes. Take 2 (really liked the vunerability) and 3 are similar. Your performances are soooo natural and beautful that you can get away with it...but I want to challenge you! ;) yes I agree one of your takes could be spokesperson. and for take 3 what would have happened if you were talking to your buddies over a beer? how would that have changed the copy/performance? or what if you are a bartener and you are wiping down the counters as you are closing the bar? Ideas to make each take more distinct.
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1st take: perfection. no notes. Take 2 (really liked the vunerability) and 3 are similar. Your performances are soooo natural and beautful that you can get away with it...but I want to challenge you! ;) yes I agree one of your takes could be spokesperson. and for take 3 what would have happened if you were talking to your buddies over a beer? how would that have changed the copy/performance? or what if you are a bartener and you are wiping down the counters as you are closing the bar? Ideas to make each take more distinct.