Again, I think you have this sweet energy to you that comes out in your tapes. One improvement that stood out to me in your Blueprint is having a clear moment before and after. Another thing I was able to see was the people you were talking to; Take1 being somebody you work with (I'm assuming you are their boss or HR?), Take2 being a friend at the manicure, and Take3 being at the bar. I would say though, Take2 and Take3 felt a little similar in tone. I would agree with Jenny where perhaps changing your own role rather than being a friend or a coworker, but a coach or a teacher, would create a little more variety. But other than that, I enjoyed watching your tapes and thought you'd be a great fit for your commercial! :)
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Hi Lizzie!
Again, I think you have this sweet energy to you that comes out in your tapes. One improvement that stood out to me in your Blueprint is having a clear moment before and after. Another thing I was able to see was the people you were talking to; Take1 being somebody you work with (I'm assuming you are their boss or HR?), Take2 being a friend at the manicure, and Take3 being at the bar. I would say though, Take2 and Take3 felt a little similar in tone. I would agree with Jenny where perhaps changing your own role rather than being a friend or a coworker, but a coach or a teacher, would create a little more variety. But other than that, I enjoyed watching your tapes and thought you'd be a great fit for your commercial! :)